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Describing Trends Lesson
Describing Trends
Lesson Overview |课程概述
Verb / Nouns about changes.
Growing Trend
Verbs:
increase
rise (compare raise)
grow
climb
go up
Nouns:
an increase
a rise
a growth
a climb
an upward movement / trend
Rapid Increase
Verbs:
surge
(sky)rocket
soar
jump
shoot up
escalate
Nouns:
a surge
a jump
a sharp rise
a dramatic increase
a spike
an escalation
Gradual Increase
Verbs:
rise gradually
increase steadily
grow slowly
edge up
Nouns:
a gradual rise
a steady increase
a slow growth
Falling Trend
Verbs:
decrease
fall
drop
go down
be reduced*
shrink
diminish
contract
Nouns:
a decrease
a decline
a fall
a drop
a reduction
a contraction
a downward movement / trend
Rapid Decrease
Verbs:
plummet
plunge
crash
tumble
Nouns:
a plummet
a plunge
a crash
a sharp fall
a steep decline
Gradual Decrease
Verbs:
decrease gradually
decline steadily
fall slowly
edge down
Nouns:
a gradual decrease
a steady decline
a slow fall
Peak Trend
peak at
reach a peak of
go up to
hit the highest point at
reach its highest level at
top out at
a high of
Trough Trend
hit the lowest point at
bottom out at
reach a trough at
dip to the lowest level at
a low of
Stable Trend
stabilize
remain stable / constant / unchanged / the same
maintain the same level
hold steady
a period of stability
Unstable Trend
Verbs:
fluctuate
vary
oscillate
swing
Nouns:
fluctuations
variations
oscillations
instability
Plateau Trend
level off
level out
flatten out
stabilize
a plateau (for growth)
Anywhere
stand at
start at / begin at
end at / finish at
Adjectives / Adverbs about changing rate and degree.
huge/hugely enormous/enormously significant/significantly noticeable/noticeably considerable/considerably marked/markedly remarkable/remarkably dramatic/dramatically drastic/drastically substantial/substantially moderate/moderately modest/modestly slight/slightly minimal/minimally marginal/marginally
quick/quickly prompt/promptly steep/steeply sudden/suddenly swift/swiftly abrupt/abruptly unexpected/unexpectedly rapid/rapidly sharp/sharply wild/wildly slow/slowly steady/steadily consistent/consistently constant/constantly gradual/gradually
💡 学会使用 approximately, almost, around/about, roughly, nearly, just above/below.
For example
Approximately 10% of the population is over 75 years old.
Almost all students attended the session.
Around 40% of students passed the test.
About a quarter of the females in the program received a promotion.
Roughly half of the male candidates received approval.
Nearly 30% of people voted for the election.
Just below 20% of citizens were eligible for the application.
Just above/over 15% of students were qualified to pass.
Exercise 1:
At the beginning of 2020, the price of gold 位于________________around $50 per gram. It then 稳步上升________________throughout 2020, 到达顶峰________________roughly $65 per gram by mid-year. However, the price 波动________________for the remainder of 2020, with some 轻微下降________________and recoveries, eventually 稳定在________________around $60 per gram by the end of the year.
Throughout 2021 and 2022, the price showed a 相对不稳定的趋势________________, with 频繁波动________________. It 轻微下降________________at some points, 到达最低点大约________________ $55 per gram in 2022, before beginning to 逐渐恢复________________.
From late 2022 onwards, the price of gold began to 稳步上升________________. This growth was particularly notable in the latter half of 2023, where the price 激增到________________around $75 per gram. The upward trend continued into 2024, with the price 飞升到最高点大约________________$90 per gram by early 2025.
📌 between X and Y / from X to Y
The line graph shows the amount of household expenditure on different items between 1995 and 2005.
The bar chart illustrates the rise in the number of tourists from 1 million to 5 million over a decade.
The temperature varied between -5°C and 10°C during the winter months.
时间介词区分:
From 1990 to 1995 / Between 1990 and 1995 During / throughout the period from 1995 to 2005 During a period of 10 years Over the (three-month) period (between April and June) In 1990 By 1995 For 5 years
📌 in
There was an increase in the number of cars on the road in Britain.
There was a decline in the percentage of cinema-goers.
There was a rise in the amount of natural gas produced in 2010.
Last decade saw a significant drop in shopping for luxury items.
📌 to
There is a marked reduction to 20% of the amount of time playing sports.
The price of oil had considerable growth to 32$ per barrel in 2007.
📌 at
The divorce rate was at its highest point in 2000.
The figure stood at 56% in 1880 when it started to rise gradually.
The number of cars peaked at 34 million in the following year.
It went up gradually at a high rate.
📌 with
The trend reached its highest point, with(at) 45% in 1990.
There was a remarkable decline to the lowest point with 30% two years later.
Germany came top in the table, with 25 million travelers in 2006.
📌 of / by
There was a substantial increase of 12% in the amount of household expenditure. (For example, the amount rose from 22% to 34%, which shows a 12% increase.)
There was a minimal reduction of 2% in the annual income for X company. (For instance, the income fell from 34% to 32%, showing a 2% difference.)
The interest rate reached a peak of 10% in 2005.
The price of gold increased by 12% between 2012 and 2015.
There was an increase of 12% in the price of gold between 2012 and 2015.
📌 for
There was a comparison between the two groups for reading and playing sports as hobbies.
The annual salary for the low-income group went up slightly.
The percentage of absenteeism was much higher for male workers than female workers in 1960.
The household expenditure on food accounted for the highest amount for the UK.
Exercise 2:
📌 more adj. than.. , as adj. as, not as….as
The number of female students was higher than that of male students in 1995.
The trend for Spain had a more dramatic rise than that of France.
Based on the given statistics, Germany is as cold as Italy in December.
📌 compare to/with, compared to/with, in comparison to/with, make/draw a comparison between A and B.
The bar chart compares the percentages for the popularity of different school subjects.
In comparison with girls, boys of the same age group had a lower success rate.
Compared with the year 2000, the number of high-school graduates had a rise.
Annual net income draws/makes a comparison between the two countries .
Tip: “to” 和 “with” 在这里可以替换
📌 double, half, triple, or quadruple that of something else
The company’s profit was triple that of the year before after implementing new marketing strategies.
The figure for unemployment tripled due to the economic recession.
The rate for crime halved over the given period.
📌 其他比较词汇:similarly, both X and Y, like, same as, in a similar way, in a similar fashion.
Similarly , Germany and France had a high rate of unemployment at 23%.
Both the UK and France established strict social rules in 2015.
Like the US , Canada contributed to the reconstruction of the affected areas after the war.
The interest rate in Japan was the same as this figure in China in 2005.
📌 对比结构:In contrast, in contrast to, a contrast between X and Y
In contrast, the figure for volleyball had a gradual decline.
In contrast to the UK , Germany had the highest number of medals in 2010.
53% of the population in Korea was 50+ years old, in contrast to 23% of the teenage population.
There was a stark contrast between the two teams.
一般常用句式
There + Be + adj. + Noun + In + Noun Phrase + Time
There was a significant increase in the number of unemployed people during the period.
There was a slight increase in the gold price / the price of gold between 2005 and 2010
Noun Phrase + Verb + Adverb (+ Noun) + Time
The number of unemployed people increased significantly (experienced / witnessed / saw a significant rise) during the period.
The gold price / the price of gold increased slightly.
将来时(预测类)可以用到的句式
The prediction/expectation/projection/forecast/anticipation/likelihood + shows/reveals/indicates/is that there is likely to be a dramatic increase in the number of car users.
It is predicted/expected/projected/estimated/ anticipated/forecast/likely that the price of food will increase dramatically (will undergo/witness/experience an increase) from 20 dollars in 2005 to 25 dollars in 2025.
The price of food is predicted/expected/anticipated/forecast/estimated to decline from 20 dollars in 2000 to 10 dollars in 2025.