Logic Fallacies in Writing

母语习惯引起的表达失误

Second, the paper book waste too many natural resources. Because it takes a lot of wood to make paper books.

these ways to spread knowledge with multimedia make people search and edit information more easily

there are…. do…. (which does…)

太概括，不够精确

On the contrary, ebook is better.

But overpopulation also bring some troubles.

没有解释完整 (Weak support)

The main cause is the high level of medical system in metropolitan city. Medical system means hospital and the healthcare service. In big city, people can get more advanced treat especially in dealing with some terrible and rare diseases. Doctors in these places always receive high-quality education or are full of experiences, while in the countryside, doctor there may less professional. In addition, it’s necessary to mention that fundamental facilities such as road constructions, design of the city and the surrounding green plants. These play an important role in deciding people’s basic feeling, and also improve citizen’s living sense of satisfaction. Last but not least, the vacant job positions are more than other places. To clarify, the more people the more needs also more chances. People can search for higher salary occupations and pick up the most appropriate one for them among plenty companies.

不精确的逻辑连接词

But overpopulation also bring some troubles. Worse traffic situations catch my view at first. To put it simply, in the megacities almost everyone has and use their privacy car, which perform traffic congestion frequently. For example, during the peak time, the road is always full of cars, even be stuck. So that residents couldn’t get their destination on time.

(revision: However, overpopulation also brings several challenges. One of the most noticeable issues is worsening traffic conditions. In simple terms, in megacities, almost everyone owns and uses a private car, which often leads to severe traffic congestion. This is especially significant during peak hours, when roads are frequently jam-packed with vehicles, sometimes coming to a complete standstill. As a result, residents are unable to reach their destinations on time.)

To begin with, professional sports and arts event promote cultural enrichment in communities. There are enormous opportunities for residents to experience and appreciate various forms of artwork and sporting activities, which can enhance a greater understanding and appreciation of diverse cultures. In addition, if a country were extremely indifferent to the development of the arts and sports, citizens’ fitness and cultural qualities would be deteriorate.

….I would argue that listening and speaking play a more imperative role than the other two.

To begin with, the main purpose of learning a language is to communicate. Most people learn a foreign language to solve overcome the language barriers, especially when they travel abroad, with the result that the ability to speak the local language prevents them from being swindled.

logical rupture:

Admittedly, it is conducive to raise competitive awareness and cultivate such ambience among students which will lead to study motivations and passions for not only the aggressive learners but the underachievers. Most university learner are prone to be enthusiastic about learning and being the top ones that are beneficial to their near future. However reasonable these grounds seem, two big worries linger.

…… I would argue that in most cases advertisements play an indispensable role during the purchasing process.

It is undeniable that the majority of customers are irrational. Compared with previous generations, the emergency of online shopping attracts an enormous quantity of people’s attention due to a variety of novelty products, and the rise in wages leads to people being able to purchase what they want even though the good may be less significant, because people will obtain a sense of blessedness.

过于极端

For example, a student, who is expert at painting, now turns to chase the grades which is not what he/she is versed in, are likely to fail in the exams and suffer mental diseases.